Page 3:
Panel 1: (Bia starts taking off her robe, and Rev realizes he is now in deep.)
“Look, Be-naked-”
Panel 2: (Rev hurriedly corrects his mistake.)
“BIA! I meant to say Bia!”
Panel 3: (Rev declares he believes things are moving too fast.)
“I never thought I’d say this, but you’re going too fast! I mean, do we really have to do this now?”
Panel 4: (Bia still continues to tease Rev.)
“It’s just that you’re too cute and sweet to resist. I can’t help but fall for your charm.”
Panel 5: (Rev pulls on his collar, realizing there may be no way out of this.)
“Oh my.”
Panels 6 & 7: (Rev lies down on the bed and tells Bia a few things before they get “started”.)
“Now Bia, before we start, please don’t tell anyone about this.
I don’t want the team to pick on me or spread rumors about this, because my parents will eventually find out, too.”
(The team has secretly been outside the room, eavesdropping, the whole time. This is due to the door to Bia’s room being open.)
Duck: “Hey, you hear that? Rev’s ‘gonna go for the big moment!”
Ace (the rabbit): “…His wedding?”
Duck: “No! No! No! The ‘big’ moment guys want most when they’re alone with a girl!”
Ace: “Oh…for real?”
Tech (the coyote): “Ha! I never knew the little guy had the guts for it!”
Duck: “Let’s see if it’s really happening…the door’s open.”
Panel 8: (Rev still tries to convince Bia not to do this, but she starts to unbutton his shirt.)
“I hope you think we’re doing the right thing here, Bia, because I should warn you that I’m not fully protected, so there could be some consequences like-”
Panels 9 & 10: (Bia starts touching Rev’s feathers, and he gives a resounding “Woohoo!”.)
Panel 11: (Rev gulps nervously and thinks to himself:)
“She’s touching my chest now!”
Panel 12: (Bia still continues to tease Rev.)
“Your feathers are so soft.”
(Rev gets excited, and his tail feathers start to wag.)
“Things are heating up in here!”

Page 3:

Panel 1: (Bia starts taking off her robe, and Rev realizes he is now in deep.)

Look, Be-naked-

Panel 2: (Rev hurriedly corrects his mistake.)

BIA! I meant to say Bia!

Panel 3: (Rev declares he believes things are moving too fast.)

I never thought I’d say this, but you’re going too fast! I mean, do we really have to do this now?

Panel 4: (Bia still continues to tease Rev.)

It’s just that you’re too cute and sweet to resist. I can’t help but fall for your charm.

Panel 5: (Rev pulls on his collar, realizing there may be no way out of this.)

Oh my.

Panels 6 & 7: (Rev lies down on the bed and tells Bia a few things before they get “started”.)

Now Bia, before we start, please don’t tell anyone about this.

I don’t want the team to pick on me or spread rumors about this, because my parents will eventually find out, too.

(The team has secretly been outside the room, eavesdropping, the whole time. This is due to the door to Bia’s room being open.)

Duck: “Hey, you hear that? Rev’s ‘gonna go for the big moment!

Ace (the rabbit): “…His wedding?

Duck: “No! No! No! The ‘big’ moment guys want most when they’re alone with a girl!

Ace: “Oh…for real?

Tech (the coyote): “Ha! I never knew the little guy had the guts for it!

Duck: “Let’s see if it’s really happening…the door’s open.

Panel 8: (Rev still tries to convince Bia not to do this, but she starts to unbutton his shirt.)

I hope you think we’re doing the right thing here, Bia, because I should warn you that I’m not fully protected, so there could be some consequences like-

Panels 9 & 10: (Bia starts touching Rev’s feathers, and he gives a resounding “Woohoo!”.)

Panel 11: (Rev gulps nervously and thinks to himself:)

She’s touching my chest now!

Panel 12: (Bia still continues to tease Rev.)

Your feathers are so soft.

(Rev gets excited, and his tail feathers start to wag.)

Things are heating up in here!

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