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Panel 1: (Ace, Duck, and Tech watch what’s happening through the door. Rev is still not quite ready.)
“Bia, I think that’s enough for now, so why don’t we call it a day and get some sleep?”
(Bia continues to rub Rev’s chest.)
“I don’t think so.”
Rev: “What- What’d you do that for?”
Panels 2 & 3: (Bia states her reasons for continuing.)
“Because I can’t get enough of your intense animal magnetism.”
(Rev’s crest and feathers start to rise up.)
Panel 4: (Bia stops rubbing Rev’s chest, as she has noticed his ruffled crest. She laughs.)
“Sorry! That’s never happened before.”
Panels 5 & 6: (Rev falls back onto Bia’s bed.)
“Oh, I’ve got such a major fever now.”
(Bia continues to seduce Rev.)
“Well, I’ve got the medicine for it.”
Panels 7, 8, & 9: (Rev falls for Bia’s charm, but then quickly realizes this is the exact situation he didn’t want to be in.)
“Please be gentle on me!”
Panels 10, 11, & 12: (Bia gives up the facade and tells Rev her true intentions, laughing.)
“Oh, Rev. I was just kidding about it the whole time. I don’t ‘wanna do it now.”
(She lifts up the covers to look at Rev.)
“How about a good-night kiss instead, Revvy?”
(Rev pulls down the covers, no longer nervous.)
Rev: “That’s okay with me, Bia.”
Panels 13, 14, & 15: (Bia turns off the light, and the team is now inside the room, listening from the outside of the bed.)
Rev: “Good night, Bia.”
Bia: “Good night, Rev.”
(Bia and Rev start to kiss, and the team can see the shadow of them kissing.)

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Panel 1: (Ace, Duck, and Tech watch what’s happening through the door. Rev is still not quite ready.)

Bia, I think that’s enough for now, so why don’t we call it a day and get some sleep?

(Bia continues to rub Rev’s chest.)

I don’t think so.

Rev: “What- What’d you do that for?

Panels 2 & 3: (Bia states her reasons for continuing.)

Because I can’t get enough of your intense animal magnetism.

(Rev’s crest and feathers start to rise up.)

Panel 4: (Bia stops rubbing Rev’s chest, as she has noticed his ruffled crest. She laughs.)

Sorry! That’s never happened before.”

Panels 5 & 6: (Rev falls back onto Bia’s bed.)

Oh, I’ve got such a major fever now.

(Bia continues to seduce Rev.)

Well, I’ve got the medicine for it.”

Panels 7, 8, & 9: (Rev falls for Bia’s charm, but then quickly realizes this is the exact situation he didn’t want to be in.)

Please be gentle on me!

Panels 10, 11, & 12: (Bia gives up the facade and tells Rev her true intentions, laughing.)

Oh, Rev. I was just kidding about it the whole time. I don’t ‘wanna do it now.

(She lifts up the covers to look at Rev.)

How about a good-night kiss instead, Revvy?

(Rev pulls down the covers, no longer nervous.)

Rev: “That’s okay with me, Bia.

Panels 13, 14, & 15: (Bia turns off the light, and the team is now inside the room, listening from the outside of the bed.)

Rev: “Good night, Bia.

Bia: “Good night, Rev.

(Bia and Rev start to kiss, and the team can see the shadow of them kissing.)

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